Thank you very much for entering the 100 Word Challenge. You have used the prompt to create quite a spooky piece of writing. You have used some good vocabulary in your writing and you have put your ideas into sentences. You have a few spelling mistakes, maybe next time you could ask a friend to help you check them.
Hi,
Thank you very much for entering the 100 Word Challenge. You have used the prompt to create quite a spooky piece of writing. You have used some good vocabulary in your writing and you have put your ideas into sentences. You have a few spelling mistakes, maybe next time you could ask a friend to help you check them.
Well done.
Mrs Stones – Bradford, U.K.