Theseus and the minotaurs

Posted on March 16, 2015 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to Theseus and the minotaurs

  1. EMILY.B says:
    March 17, 2015 at 1:50 pm

    It’s amazing Jensen where did you get the ideas.your openers are brilliant.

  2. Ruby says:
    March 17, 2015 at 1:55 pm

    Amazing vocabulary!
    I loved the way you have used ellipsis.
    The wow words are amazing I would like to hear more off your work

  3. William f says:
    March 17, 2015 at 1:57 pm

    Hi Jensen I love your writing , it is so descriptive ! I really liked reading it .
    I am looking forward reading more soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  4. william says:
    March 18, 2015 at 6:04 pm

    Hi Jensen,

    I loved your piece of writing because it was so descriptive and you used ellipses as well.
    the sentence I liked was: He lived in a beautiful palace and he had stacks of money
    And the fact that you used to be continued….

    Looking forward to reading more!

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