An Amazonian Adventure

4 Responses to An Amazonian Adventure

1. Evie says:

   March 9, 2015 at 4:04 pm

   I loved your language

   From Evie
2. Lily says:

   March 10, 2015 at 1:53 pm

   I loved your opener because it had ly word! I liked your language. Maybe you could use some more adjectives. Keep up the amazing work!
   • Samantha says:

     April 1, 2015 at 2:47 pm

     I will use more adjectives next time.
3. samantha says:

   March 10, 2015 at 1:55 pm

   I love your writing! I liked the way you used the word stunning. Can you use more connectives next time?

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