Thanks for sharing this story Jensen. The 100WC is a great way to be creative. I like the visual that matches the story. I was happy to read that the seahorse learned his lesson and would only swim in safe waters.
Thank you very much for entering the 100 Word Challenge, I enjoyed reading your writing. You’ve used a range of punctuation and vocabulary in your writing which helps the reader clearly imagine what is happening. A couple of your sentences are missing their capital letters at the start, maybe next time ask a friend to help you check them.
I loved your story because you’ve made a great effort. From Evie
I liked your starting opener long,long ago. Maybe you could use a some more adjectives to make your writing better. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for sharing this story Jensen. The 100WC is a great way to be creative. I like the visual that matches the story. I was happy to read that the seahorse learned his lesson and would only swim in safe waters.
Hi Jensen,
Thank you very much for entering the 100 Word Challenge, I enjoyed reading your writing. You’ve used a range of punctuation and vocabulary in your writing which helps the reader clearly imagine what is happening. A couple of your sentences are missing their capital letters at the start, maybe next time ask a friend to help you check them.
Well done!
Mrs Stones – Bradford, U.K.