SUPERHERO

Posted on March 2, 2015 by Deleted User
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13 Responses to SUPERHERO

  1. Nathaniel says:
    March 3, 2015 at 2:08 pm

    AMAZING!

  2. Evie says:
    March 3, 2015 at 2:11 pm

    I loved the way you called him Super Spider From evie

  3. Jessica says:
    March 3, 2015 at 2:18 pm

    I liked your last phourGraf

  4. Isobel says:
    March 3, 2015 at 2:19 pm

    Good openers!You really interested me in all this superhero business!by Isobel

  5. Jessica says:
    March 3, 2015 at 2:19 pm

    AMAZING AND SO MUCH FUN

  6. Hockw says:
    March 3, 2015 at 2:21 pm

    I love how you put really exiting things in capital letters.
    And you used amazing vocabulary and a load of good connectives and punctuation.

  7. Jensen says:
    March 3, 2015 at 2:22 pm

    Great story you picked.great adjectives!what is the next story you are going to pick?

  8. Alex says:
    March 3, 2015 at 3:50 pm

    That was AMAZING!!!

  9. Ryan says:
    March 3, 2015 at 4:08 pm

    I loved how you said once there was a man but not any old man. I Loved how you put superher in capital letters

  10. joseph says:
    March 3, 2015 at 6:49 pm

    What happens next.

  11. Hockw says:
    March 4, 2015 at 4:43 pm

    I like the name of the superhero

    PS I loved the whole story!

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