My poem

Posted on March 3, 2015 by Deleted User
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7 Responses to My poem

  1. Evie says:
    March 3, 2015 at 4:52 pm

    I loved the way you do it from Evie

  2. joseph says:
    March 3, 2015 at 5:00 pm

    I liket wen you used rimeing werds.
    And I liked wen I was one I aet a bun.

  3. Lauren says:
    March 3, 2015 at 5:55 pm

    I think your writing is very good.

    I really liked it when you said “when I was eleven I wish I was seven”. Funny.

  4. Ryan says:
    March 3, 2015 at 7:05 pm

    I really liked the very first poem I never seen anything like it

  5. KATHLEEN says:
    March 3, 2015 at 8:05 pm

    Hi I loved the way you made your poem rhyme

  6. Ella says:
    March 5, 2015 at 7:37 pm

    I loved the way you made it about when you were diffrent ages fom your friend Ella

  7. Isobel says:
    March 10, 2015 at 1:40 pm

    This is the best!!!What made you think of this?Did this all this really happen?

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