I really liked your opener a few minutes later. good adjectives! maybe you could use some more openers but the rest of it was brillant! keep up the good work!
Loved your opener a long, long ago because it hooks the reader into reading more of your stunning stories!
I liked the ending when it was the summer holidays!
Look at your spellings because you have spelt adventure wrong.
Except from that it was BRILLANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really liked your opener a few minutes later. good adjectives! maybe you could use some more openers but the rest of it was brillant! keep up the good work!
great story!!!!!!!!!
from Alex.
Loved your story, dont lose that brilliant imagintion of yours
Very nice story, also I like what the girl’s did. Try to describe the ring in more detail.
I like the story and the pinchers .!
amassing and I like the ending where they have summer holiday I like the couler of the diamond .
Excellent openers!!!!!!!
Loved your opener a long, long ago because it hooks the reader into reading more of your stunning stories!
I liked the ending when it was the summer holidays!
Look at your spellings because you have spelt adventure wrong.
Except from that it was BRILLANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BY LILY
I love your story.