The talking motorbike

Posted on March 7, 2015 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to The talking motorbike

  1. blakk says:
    March 8, 2015 at 12:13 pm

    I like this story and I have never seen a talking motorbike in my whole life.

  2. nnorval says:
    March 9, 2015 at 5:05 am

    Good opening, Jensen. You have you’d good descriptions to set the scene. In order to make your writing better try to add a few extra ideas to each paragraph.
    Great blogging!

  3. corda says:
    March 9, 2015 at 8:06 am

    Amazing detail Jensen!!!!!!!!

    from,Alex

  4. Tom says:
    March 10, 2015 at 1:47 pm

    I love your puzzle! Try to use more connectives but other wise it’s fantastic

  5. Ava says:
    April 15, 2015 at 2:47 pm

    That is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder how it could talk?

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