it was a brilliant story because you have used a lot of time openers which I really liked! Maybe you could of used delicious instead of yummy but yummy is also a very nice word to use as well! I lived how you described when we acted out the story! Keep up the good work!
it was a brilliant story because you have used a lot of time openers which I really liked! Maybe you could of used delicious instead of yummy but yummy is also a very nice word to use as well! I lived how you described when we acted out the story! Keep up the good work!
I like it very much it sounds like a good day.
Try to start with different opner’s.
Good diary
I loved it
I really enjoyed reading your diary. I would love to see the butterflies at Wisley. How many were there?