A very interesting response William. I’m pleased to see you are experimenting with a range of vocabulary, the use of parenthesis to include extra information is very effective. Some sections are difficult to read due to the font you have chosen. Try to ensure that your work is set out with the reader in mind, this includes using a new line for a new speaker. Well done and good luck with the rest of the 100wc posts this year.
A very interesting response William. I’m pleased to see you are experimenting with a range of vocabulary, the use of parenthesis to include extra information is very effective. Some sections are difficult to read due to the font you have chosen. Try to ensure that your work is set out with the reader in mind, this includes using a new line for a new speaker. Well done and good luck with the rest of the 100wc posts this year.