I like how you’ve said your friend s are the best but there was one mistake you put we like to singing apart from that it was great!
Hope that this is better. From Evie
That was nice to say that you’re friends are really nice to you but you’ve made a mistake and you said singing instead of sing
It was very nice to say to your friends but I can see tow mistakes.
I like the way you said your friends are the best
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I like how you’ve said your friend s are the best but there was one mistake you put we like to singing apart from that it was great!
Hope that this is better.
From Evie
That was nice to say that you’re friends are really nice to you but you’ve made a mistake and you said singing instead of sing
It was very nice to say to your friends but I can see tow mistakes.
I like the way you said your friends are the best