I love the story and I he has your name and I know that it was ment to be you, I also love the whole thing
Who’s the weakest in the story?
What is going to be your next adventure?
That was an amazing story,I never knew you were such a good writer. I love your first pharagraph it described Teddy in an great way. That was the best story I’ve read so far
I love the way you used your adjectives.
What was that scary man from?
He was from batman
BRILIANT
I like the way you said you saw a mysterious figure!
Spooky Teddy!
I like the way you described the wired (and spooky)man!
I love the story and I he has your name and I know that it was ment to be you, I also love the whole thing
Who’s the weakest in the story?
What is going to be your next adventure?
What happens next.
You used grate wow words.
I would love to here more often.
Who often do you write like that.
Very nice story.I liked the bit were you said…….Until Teddy’s next adventure.
That was an amazing story,I never knew you were such a good writer. I love your first pharagraph it described Teddy in an great way. That was the best story I’ve read so far