Lottie that is a great description of the rainforest. I really liked how described the waterfall as crashing. But maybe to make your brilliant work even better you could of used more full stops instead of commas unless from that your work is amazing!
Lottie that is a great description of the rainforest. I really liked how described the waterfall as crashing. But maybe to make your brilliant work even better you could of used more full stops instead of commas unless from that your work is amazing!