elizabeth and the sky serpent

Posted on March 16, 2015 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to elizabeth and the sky serpent

  1. Jensen says:
    March 17, 2015 at 2:01 pm

    Great imaginative story. You could work on your spellings. I wonder what happens next?

  2. Isobel says:
    March 17, 2015 at 2:02 pm

    GOOD! I just want to say that you have put a double a instead of just the one.

  3. Ella says:
    March 17, 2015 at 2:03 pm

    It is an amazing story Emily but you used a twice. I want to read more of your work!

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