The Rose

Posted on March 17, 2015 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to The Rose

  1. David coxon says:
    March 17, 2015 at 5:29 pm

    🙂 Very good vocabulary
    🙂 I like that you ended the story at that point because I really wan to hear the end
    🙁 Although the vocabulary was good, you could use more of it

    Altogether it was VERY VERY good:)

  2. toby says:
    March 17, 2015 at 7:21 pm

    It is a brilliant story and it’s full of good descriptive words but you could use a bit more punctuation

  3. Aimal says:
    March 18, 2015 at 4:39 pm

    I love the part were you said.To be continued…

  4. Isobel says:
    March 24, 2015 at 2:06 pm

    Good cliffhanger! I was blown away with how much you can write!

  5. KATHLEEN says:
    March 30, 2015 at 10:19 am

    Great writing Sophie. How did you do it?

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