Lovely diary entry loved your time openers like ‘after and next’! Maybe you could use a wider range of connectives. Other than that it was brilliant! Did Seamus like the bright,pink pig toy? Keep up the good work!
Seamus loved the bright pink pig toy he plays with it all the time since we bought it.
Good choice of buying a bright pink toy!
Well even though Seamus is a boy dog he is mad so he love’s pink!
I like that you started your sentence.
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Lovely diary entry loved your time openers like ‘after and next’! Maybe you could use a wider range of connectives. Other than that it was brilliant! Did Seamus like the bright,pink pig toy? Keep up the good work!
Seamus loved the bright pink pig toy he plays with it all the time since we bought it.
Good choice of buying a bright pink toy!
Well even though Seamus is a boy dog he is mad so he love’s pink!
I like that you started your sentence.