I love it hope you do more poems like this one 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
I love your punctuation and rhyming words.
That was great! I loved the way it rhymed do you like poems because I loved them. I hope you do some more poems.
I will try to do some more poems!
I thought that was a brilliant poem.
That is a great poem ,maybe you could put a full stop somewhere but it was really good! Nyree.
This is amazing for a year 3 even with no rhymes its really cool.
I think you poem is really good. can you wright more poems.
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I love it hope you
do more poems like this one
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
I love your punctuation and rhyming words.
That was great! I loved the way it rhymed do you like poems because I loved them. I hope you do some more poems.
I will try to do some more poems!
I thought that was a brilliant poem.
That is a great poem ,maybe you could put a full stop somewhere but it was really good!
Nyree.
This is amazing for a year 3 even with no rhymes its really cool.
I think you poem is really good. can you wright more poems.