my ultmate adventure

Posted on March 23, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to my ultmate adventure

  1. KATHLEEN says:
    March 23, 2015 at 2:13 pm

    I enjoyed how you used a cliff hanger. You really described how you felt. I really liked every single bit of it. Tremendous work keep it up.

  2. Alex says:
    March 23, 2015 at 2:14 pm

    WOW!!!
    Good openers.

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