my ulneted adventure

Posted on March 23, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to my ulneted adventure

  1. William f says:
    March 23, 2015 at 2:25 pm

    Hi Rubs , your story was AMAZING!!!!!!! You used so many amazing adjectives and openers such as ”As well as ”
    I’m looking forward to reading more of your stories soon!

  2. Ava says:
    March 24, 2015 at 2:00 pm

    I love your written! I think you could add a bit more openers.

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