Nice work Nathaniel. A good tip is to read your work aloud to see where you are missing some full stops or to get a friend to have a look for you. It sounded like a scary shark though!
Great work Nathaniel. A good tip is to read your work aloud so that you can hear where you are missing the full stops or to get a friend to read it for you. Your shark sounded scary though!
Nice work Nathaniel. A good tip is to read your work aloud to see where you are missing some full stops or to get a friend to have a look for you. It sounded like a scary shark though!
Great work Nathaniel. A good tip is to read your work aloud so that you can hear where you are missing the full stops or to get a friend to read it for you. Your shark sounded scary though!