I really liked your diary because I liked your starting opener ‘On Saturday’!
Who came first in the cross country race out of the year 3 boys and the year 4boys?
Maybe you could of used some adjectives or more openers.
Other than that it was brilliant!
That must have been an amazing weekend! Great work keep it up!
WOW I am am just amazed
I really liked your diary because I liked your starting opener ‘On Saturday’!
Who came first in the cross country race out of the year 3 boys and the year 4boys?
Maybe you could of used some adjectives or more openers.
Other than that it was brilliant!
Thank you it was fun
I love your writing! I also like the way you used the word received, next time try and tell us about the kind of food you ate at McDonalds!
Did you have fun at all of the party’s? You have used a lot of vocabulary. Well done. Was there 100 people in all of the rases.
It looks like you had a great weekend who was the first girl in year 3 .
Did you really do this in just one weekend! I also went to two parties. You could could have drawn me in a bit more. Maybe you could use adjectives