the dragon

Posted on March 29, 2015 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to the dragon

  1. Oliver says:
    April 4, 2015 at 4:41 pm

    nice description on dragons but maybe next time you could include more connectives to make it flow better! 🙂

  2. Ava says:
    April 14, 2015 at 5:20 pm

    I love your writing! Your WOW words are really good and I adore your simels!!

  3. Samantha says:
    April 21, 2015 at 5:24 pm

    I like that you described all of your writing. you could write a bit more but the rest is real good.

  4. william says:
    April 22, 2015 at 4:03 pm

    liked your writing!
    next time you could write a bit more
    I also liked your adjectives.

  5. KATHLEEN says:
    May 25, 2015 at 4:57 pm

    Great similes and description.

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