Lots of good description. I like how you tell where the different lanterns are positioned using different points on the compass. A spelling mistake though. You spelt believe wrong.
Loved it!
how many lanterns are there?
I like the way you used brackets.
your work was brilliant.
When is your next story?
can’t wait for it!
I didn’t know you were a great writer!
Lots of good description. I like how you tell where the different lanterns are positioned using different points on the compass. A spelling mistake though. You spelt believe wrong.
Loved it!
how many lanterns are there?
I like the way you used brackets.
your work was brilliant.
When is your next story?
can’t wait for it!
I didn’t know you were a great writer!
William