WOW Ava great description!
I like how you linked your idea to our Topic Stone Age!
Maybe you could use some Historic vocabulary.
Was it in the Paleolithic Period, Neolithic Period or the Mesolithic Period?
GREAT WORK!!!!!
Interesting facts Ava brilliant writing. But just to make your writing a little bit better always notice your spellings because catched is a word you wouldn’t use the word you would use would be caught. But amazing work Ava keep it up!
Loved it!
You used brilliant facts about the Stone Age
But you made a few mistakes: it is caught not cached, you don’t need a comma next to Stone Age people.
Apart from that I really enjoyed reading your writing!
WOW Ava great description!
I like how you linked your idea to our Topic Stone Age!
Maybe you could use some Historic vocabulary.
Was it in the Paleolithic Period, Neolithic Period or the Mesolithic Period?
GREAT WORK!!!!!
I love the story Ava very interesting facts about the stone age
Interesting facts Ava brilliant writing. But just to make your writing a little bit better always notice your spellings because catched is a word you wouldn’t use the word you would use would be caught. But amazing work Ava keep it up!
Good facts about the Stone Age Ava
Hi Ava I loved your great facts and pictures.I cant wait for some other facts.
From Evie
Loved it!
You used brilliant facts about the Stone Age
But you made a few mistakes: it is caught not cached, you don’t need a comma next to Stone Age people.
Apart from that I really enjoyed reading your writing!
Good facts Ava!
I think this is great. Lots of quick, fun facts.