the mysterious touch

Posted on March 3, 2015 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to the mysterious touch

  1. Alex says:
    March 3, 2015 at 3:39 pm

    amazing story
    I wonder what happens next?

  2. joseph says:
    March 3, 2015 at 6:36 pm

    I loved your adjectives.
    Great story I wonder what happens next.

  3. Ryan says:
    March 3, 2015 at 7:02 pm

    I really love the title the mysterious touch I think you’re story was great you’re one is so much better then mine

  4. Teddy says:
    March 3, 2015 at 8:06 pm

    i loved the the way you described the girl.

  5. Lily says:
    March 5, 2015 at 8:57 pm

    I really liked the start of your story with an ing opener! I liked the title the mysterious touch it makes people want to read your story it really hooks the reader in!

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