I think you could write a bit more because you’re an amazing writer but I really liked the start of your story and the starting of your story once upon a time! You could also use an adjective to describe the little ninja. you have put a lot of effort in your work keep up the good work!
I like the way you have highlighted the text.
I like the starting of your story. why did you chose to write about the little ninja ? You could write a bit more but, everything else is the best.
I think you could write a bit more because you’re an amazing writer but I really liked the start of your story and the starting of your story once upon a time! You could also use an adjective to describe the little ninja. you have put a lot of effort in your work keep up the good work!
I think it was very good Joseph, maybe you could write a bit more of the story next time.
What happened next Joseph?