I really liked how you took on the story of Harry Potter and then converted it in to your own words and adjectives. Your work is good but maybe to make it even better use the word on instead of in when you’re writing when the next story is.
I liked the way you linked it to Theseus and the Minotaur!
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I really liked how you took on the story of Harry Potter and then converted it in to your own words and adjectives. Your work is good but maybe to make it even better use the word on instead of in when you’re writing when the next story is.
I liked the way you linked it to Theseus and the Minotaur!