This is a great use of the prompt words Nathaniel. You have done well to include them all.
Your short sentences make me want to read on and I am certainly curious about those white eyes Steve saw when he investigated the pipes. Was it Herobrine???
You might like to read your work aloud before you publish Nathaniel. If you do you will hear where all your full stops should go.
Keep up this super writing.
Jackie
New Plymouth
New Zealand
I like it Nathaniel!!!
You did a good job on full stops!!!
I like it
Very good and fun I like it when you put all of the exiting thing in capitals !
Great Wow words! When’s your next story?
This is a great use of the prompt words Nathaniel. You have done well to include them all.
Your short sentences make me want to read on and I am certainly curious about those white eyes Steve saw when he investigated the pipes. Was it Herobrine???
You might like to read your work aloud before you publish Nathaniel. If you do you will hear where all your full stops should go.
Keep up this super writing.
Jackie
New Plymouth
New Zealand