the monster adventure

Posted on March 9, 2015 by Deleted User
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  1. Mrs. Krefting says:
    March 9, 2015 at 4:19 pm

    Hi William,
    I love your story. So creative! Be sure to have someone help you to edit your work to help you find your spelling errors. I noticed that you used hoped instead of hopped and of instead of off. The errors in spelling sometimes take away from the flow of your writing. Keep up with the writing though. I look forward to reading more soon!

    Mrs. Krefting
    LC 5D
    Greystone Centennial Middle School
    Spruce Grove, Alberta, Canada

    • William f says:
      March 17, 2015 at 2:54 pm

      Thank you so much you are the only person who commented on me I hope you can comment on another one .zdd

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