the best Easter ever

Posted on March 10, 2015 by Deleted User
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7 Responses to the best Easter ever

  1. Lily says:
    March 10, 2015 at 1:37 pm

    I liked your opener but maybe you could use some adjectives to describe the Easter bunny or the bed. I wonder what happened next?

  2. Jessica says:
    March 10, 2015 at 1:43 pm

    You have a great story of the Ester bunny but you forgot the in a place! Well done From Jessica

  3. samantha says:
    March 10, 2015 at 1:47 pm

    I love your story because you said the Easter bunny came into your room. Why was he sleeping in your bed? I love your opens.

  4. Jessica says:
    March 10, 2015 at 1:47 pm

    I like your work and it is a great deep up the good work and I love it so much fun..

  5. joseph says:
    March 10, 2015 at 1:53 pm

    what happens next.

  6. Daniel says:
    March 10, 2015 at 1:55 pm

    I have noticed that you have spelt on in stead of one.
    You could put some more writing in.

    From Daniel

  7. Rosie says:
    March 17, 2015 at 2:02 pm

    You need to put I woke and I saw a Easter bunny and you need to check your spellings

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