the green sea horse

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7 Responses to the green sea horse

  1. AVA says:

    I love your writing!
    I know how you can improve your writing. You can use more vocabulary.

  2. Lottie says:

    Very nice good story of the green sea horse. Can you tell how the sea horse got into the pipe?

  3. Ella says:

    It was extremely destcriptive. Instead of saying tiptoed you can say snuck. Where did you get the ideas from?

  4. joseph says:

    I like the seahorse picture.
    I like the ending.

  5. Rosie says:

    Emily I really liked when you said a creaky door

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