I love your writing! I know how you can improve your writing. You can use more vocabulary.
Thank you Ava
Very nice good story of the green sea horse. Can you tell how the sea horse got into the pipe?
Tank you Lottie
It was extremely destcriptive. Instead of saying tiptoed you can say snuck. Where did you get the ideas from?
I like the seahorse picture. I like the ending.
Emily I really liked when you said a creaky door
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I love your writing!
I know how you can improve your writing. You can use more vocabulary.
Thank you Ava
Very nice good story of the green sea horse. Can you tell how the sea horse got into the pipe?
Tank you Lottie
It was extremely destcriptive. Instead of saying tiptoed you can say snuck. Where did you get the ideas from?
I like the seahorse picture.
I like the ending.
Emily I really liked when you said a creaky door