My Sister

Posted on March 10, 2015 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to My Sister

  1. Jensen says:
    March 11, 2015 at 6:10 pm

    I love the way it rhymes.
    Such good vocabulary.
    Is rhyming your faviroute price of writing?

  2. william says:
    March 12, 2015 at 5:26 pm

    I liked the rhyming words you put in the poem.
    Loved it!

  3. Lily says:
    March 12, 2015 at 8:15 pm

    I really liked how it rhymes! I enjoyed all the vocabulary you used at the end of the lines! Do you like writing? Do you like to write writing that includes writing?

  4. Isobel says:
    March 23, 2015 at 2:24 pm

    Good rhymes! I like your adjectives!

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