Thanks for including me in your breath taking story.I will be looking forward to the next part of your story.I liked the part that you said To be continued…… DUM DUM DUM. It is so good that there is not one thing that you should improve.
I really want to find out what happens in part two.
thanks for including me in it.
But I realized that you spelled poison wrong you spelled it like this: poisen. but it spells poison.
apart from that I loved it and I loved the way you put to be continued…… DUM DUM DUM.
That isn’t all the things I like ab out it I also liked…. ALL OF IT!
Thanks for including me in your breath taking story.I will be looking forward to the next part of your story.I liked the part that you said To be continued…… DUM DUM DUM. It is so good that there is not one thing that you should improve.
I really want to find out what happens in part two.
thanks for including me in it.
But I realized that you spelled poison wrong you spelled it like this: poisen. but it spells poison.
apart from that I loved it and I loved the way you put to be continued…… DUM DUM DUM.
That isn’t all the things I like ab out it I also liked…. ALL OF IT!