My dairy

Posted on March 14, 2015 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to My dairy

  1. Lily says:
    March 16, 2015 at 7:49 am

    Very good diary I liked your opener ‘surprisingly’! Maybe you could of wrote a bit more! What did you do when you got to Isobel’s house?

  2. Tom says:
    March 16, 2015 at 1:55 pm

    like it. you could of done a bit more to effect the reader

  3. Callum says:
    March 17, 2015 at 7:01 pm

    You have used very good adjectives and verbs but you need to check your spelling and grammar ( goodbye is 1 word )

    By:Callum

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