Hi tom, I really like your poem there are so many good adjectives that rhymes with really good words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry I did to many exclamation marks I’m just mad about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am looking forward to reading more of your books.
I liked your poem because I loved the way it rhymed!!!
I did THREE exclamation marks because it was so good!
Maybe you could of wrote a bit more but it’s ok if you didn’t want to.
Does your mum now about this or did you do it for her and the mums but mainly for your mum?
It is very nice and very kind.
If your mum read this she would cry with happiness.
You should make the poem a little longer.
Keep on writing and always improve
Tom’s Mum
Your poem is lovely Thomas . Very thoughtful and sweet.
I like your rhyming and the way you have displayed the poem.
I hope you enjoyed putting the poem together as much as I have enjoyed reading it.
I like the tittle and how it is based on mothers. You could work on the riming.
It is a lovely poem and I’m shou your mum will like it.
We’ll she did
Great rhyming poem it made me laugh so much. Did you really do this on Mother’s Day?
Yes I did!
Hi tom, I really like your poem there are so many good adjectives that rhymes with really good words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry I did to many exclamation marks I’m just mad about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am looking forward to reading more of your books.
I love your poem!!! Does your mum know?
Yes
I liked your poem because I loved the way it rhymed!!!
I did THREE exclamation marks because it was so good!
Maybe you could of wrote a bit more but it’s ok if you didn’t want to.
Does your mum now about this or did you do it for her and the mums but mainly for your mum?
It was very sweet made me laughed. I love it!!!!
I like the rhyming in your poem. Are you going to write a poem for Father’s Day next time?
Why not?
Hi Tom I love your poem because it is very sweet to say that
From Evie
Hi Tom,
I loved the rhyming words you used
I loved it!
How did you come up with those ideas?
Mums really are good aren’t they!
Of course they are
that’s so sweet. I bet your Mum liked it!! Maybe you could of done some more though.
Great rhyming good title not that much punctuation
It is very nice and very kind.
If your mum read this she would cry with happiness.
You should make the poem a little longer.
Keep on writing and always improve
Tom that is a lovely comment, your mum will love that
I like it a lot
Keep it up its amazing I love the way it ryhmes
Hi ,
Great ideas and lovely rhyming too. I hope your mum has seen it. [ – :
It was really nice of you to talk about your mum like that she would be really proud of you. I also like the way it rhymed smoothly.
Really good rhyming.
I love that your verses were rhyming I bet your mum loved that 🙂
lovely poem
Tom’s Mum
Your poem is lovely Thomas . Very thoughtful and sweet.
I like your rhyming and the way you have displayed the poem.
I hope you enjoyed putting the poem together as much as I have enjoyed reading it.
A love your poem it is very sweet i bet your mum LOVED IT 🙂 🙂
Of corse she did!!!!!
Your so good at rhyming you should be a poet when your older.Also every mum will absolutely love that