that was a amazing story I love the way you described the Galator he sounds really scary I wouldn’t like to be any where near him I don’t think I could say any thing you need to infroove on
I enjoyed how the main focus is on Clara reading a myth because if there would have been different characters it would have been a bit confusing . Next time maybe you could add a few more adjectives. But well done!
I really liked the name , Galator that really drew me in.
The Glator sounds extremely scary.
Daniel langley
that was a amazing story I love the way you described the Galator he sounds really scary I wouldn’t like to be any where near him I don’t think I could say any thing you need to infroove on
That was a lovely story you were wright you should be careful what you wish for it could come true.
I enjoyed how the main focus is on Clara reading a myth because if there would have been different characters it would have been a bit confusing . Next time maybe you could add a few more adjectives. But well done!
Thank you very much for that comment I will start improving on my adjectives soon.
Kathleen I love your story so much. I the vocabulary.
Thank you Emily.