Amazon adventer

Posted on March 16, 2015 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to Amazon adventer

  1. sophie says:
    March 16, 2015 at 1:51 pm

    good openers and good dipscrition

  2. Isobel says:
    March 16, 2015 at 1:53 pm

    Good description Lauren! Maybe you could of done a cliff hanger? Nice openers! by Isobel!

  3. samantha says:
    March 17, 2015 at 2:03 pm

    I like how you started with as they turned the corner. You have described lots of things.

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