Theseus and the Minotaur part two

4 Responses to Theseus and the Minotaur part two

1. Isobel says:

   March 16, 2015 at 1:56 pm

   You could put a comer between vicious and flesh eating.
2. Matthew says:

   March 19, 2015 at 9:51 am

   hello tom,
   I like the use of description through your story. Next time think about where you put your inverted commas. I really like your story because it makes me feel like it`s me that’s about to be eaten. So well done there tom.
3. Nate says:

   March 19, 2015 at 9:52 am

   Hello Tom
   You need to look at your work and your inverted comas in the right place. Good work. Good 100wc Tom.:)
4. Alfie says:

   March 19, 2015 at 9:53 am

   hi Tom

   Great 100wc we have been doing Greek story’s to, try putting words with commas and words in the right places.

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