THE MONKEYS ADVENTURE

Posted on March 16, 2015 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to THE MONKEYS ADVENTURE

  1. Mrs Winter Sharjah English School u.a.e. (Team100WC) says:
    March 17, 2015 at 3:53 am

    Hello Samantha, I really did enjoy reading your story. How adventurous those monkey’s were! Your story is full of description and great vocabulary which really helps the reader to visualise the scene. Try and keep an eye on punctuation, there are a couple of missing commas and also grammar. Well done, great work, keep writing 🙂

  2. Jessica says:
    March 17, 2015 at 1:48 pm

    Well done nice and easy to get the reader hooked up in your story Lovely story

  3. joseph says:
    March 17, 2015 at 1:52 pm

    I rally like it

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