you should add more writing to your work.
it is very interesting and cool
the pictures show some detail of the things and that is very good.
keep on writing and keep on blogging and always improve .
THAT WAS A REALY GOOD STORY AND I ENJOYED READING IT . AFTER READING THIS I AM GOING TO GO HOME AND DOWNLOAD IT . IT WAS A EXTREMLY GOOD STORY AND I LIKED READING IT.
Love it fab story but stop doing erm… and … and don’t do a shopping list of mobs do creepers, zombies and cave spides etc. Also instead of the end do THE END to make it more powerful.
I don’t mind Minecraft myself , I think the idea is quite good, it gives a lot of information and was quite enjoyable to read. Make a Minecraft two . [ – :
I really like the setting ‘ minecraft’ super good! You have used brilliant descriptive words and amazing punctuation! Are you going to make a minecraft two? Keep up the BRILLANT!
Best minecraft story ever! I really wish I could write like you. I loved the way you said ten minutes later. You could of made it a haunted mansion and put creepers in it for whoever goes in it
It sounds like what I would do in the game
you should add more writing to your work.
it is very interesting and cool
the pictures show some detail of the things and that is very good.
keep on writing and keep on blogging and always improve .
THAT WAS A REALY GOOD STORY AND I ENJOYED READING IT . AFTER READING THIS I AM GOING TO GO HOME AND DOWNLOAD IT . IT WAS A EXTREMLY GOOD STORY AND I LIKED READING IT.
Love it fab story but stop doing erm… and … and don’t do a shopping list of mobs do creepers, zombies and cave spides etc. Also instead of the end do THE END to make it more powerful.
AMAZING! writing and cool pictures. keep it up
I really like your story But the ghasts wont fit in. you really need a whitches
You’ve used brilliant punctuation and good descriptive words but maybe you could use a few more wow words and describe the house a bit more.
I ment a whitch
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I don’t mind Minecraft myself , I think the idea is quite good, it gives a lot of information and was quite enjoyable to read. Make a Minecraft two . [ – :
Im not a fan of minecraft but you got me interested 🙂
It’s fantastic but you have put spiders twice next to each other
I know t was ment to be cave spiders and spiders
Very interesting you make me feel Like I can do anything in the world
Awesome story!!!!
Good use of connectives!!!
Awesome story!!!!
Good use of connectives!!!
I really like the setting ‘ minecraft’ super good! You have used brilliant descriptive words and amazing punctuation! Are you going to make a minecraft two? Keep up the BRILLANT!
Thanks
Best minecraft story ever! I really wish I could write like you. I loved the way you said ten minutes later. You could of made it a haunted mansion and put creepers in it for whoever goes in it
The story was really good.
I loved how you said be careful so we started building
Thanks Ryan
I might make a minecraft 3
Good idea Jensen but it t was good anyway
that is so cool and its something that i would do
i like minecraft even though i am a girl yr4.