Elf game

Posted on March 16, 2015 by Deleted User
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13 Responses to Elf game

  1. Annabelle says:
    March 17, 2015 at 9:54 am

    I love your game can you do more of them??????

  2. owen says:
    March 17, 2015 at 9:56 am

    not trying to be bossy, but try not to use and too much

  3. stevt says:
    March 17, 2015 at 10:05 am

    Well done for using capital letters for names. I like your Elf game

  4. elliot says:
    March 17, 2015 at 10:09 am

    welldone

  5. langn says:
    March 17, 2015 at 10:10 am

    That is a great story it is very interesting

  6. daniel greaves says:
    March 17, 2015 at 10:11 am

    Lots of good description. Like how you told when you got picked up. Only real problem is you spelt earth wrong but the rest was GREAT!!!

  7. Alban says:
    March 17, 2015 at 10:12 am

    it is very cool and very funny I think you should keep writing things like this.

  8. mia d says:
    March 17, 2015 at 10:15 am

    That’s really good. Maybe you could try and make some more????

  9. Trinity says:
    March 17, 2015 at 10:17 am

    I think it is good I may play it……….

  10. holly says:
    March 17, 2015 at 10:23 am

    I love your game it’s AMAZING can you do some
    more games ??? 🙂 🙂 🙂 love holly and maddie

  11. emily says:
    March 17, 2015 at 1:54 pm

    I really like it.Thank you for putting me and Tom in your story .It is the best story I have read.

  12. AVA says:
    March 17, 2015 at 1:58 pm

    I love it! If you use more adjectives your work will be really good

  13. mia d says:
    March 17, 2015 at 4:09 pm

    PLEASE MAKE SOME MORE!

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