You could of……..
Added more detail
Correct your spellings
Do more animals
More pictures
I like the small pictures at the end of your sentence
I like the way you spaced it out
I liked all of the story and it is a great way of saying that the snake habitat.well done and cep up the good work and I have a lot more to come back to comment.
You could of……..
Added more detail
Correct your spellings
Do more animals
More pictures
I like the small pictures at the end of your sentence
I like the way you spaced it out
Very descriptive sentences which we love. Just be careful of
your spelling. To help you, this is how you spell (parrot). Love holly
and Maddie. 🙂
don`t forget you`re spellings.
I like your photos
I like the way you wrote about animals.I like the exclamation mark after the first two words.
I liked when you described animals and put the pictures up so you know what you it is
I liked all of the story and it is a great way of saying that the snake habitat.well done and cep up the good work and I have a lot more to come back to comment.
I really enjoyed reading it.
I liked your pictures and symbols maybe you should check your spelling
In case you wanted to know this is how you spell (parrot).
Samantha’s little sister Isabelle. she likes parrot’s and likes your pitchers.