My diary

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7 Responses to My diary

  1. charlie says:

    good adjectives

  2. holly says:

    I think that it is a wonderful diary and I hope that you had a good time 🙂

  3. Thomas says:

    Love your diary
    Try to add feelings

  4. Alex says:

    I love it!!!!!
    Great connectives!!!

  5. KATHLEEN says:

    I really like how your openers were varied. I really enjoyed reading your great work. Keep it up!!

  6. Isobel says:

    Good work!Add more adjectives next time!

  7. jess says:

    Good describing words

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