It’s awesome!!! I haven’t got any mistakes to say.
Hi William
I loved your story. I liked your adjectives. I also liked the part where you needed to go to the toilet and your brother flushed you in and you landed on a pillow!
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It’s awesome!!! I haven’t got any mistakes to say.
Hi William
I loved your story.
I liked your adjectives.
I also liked the part where you needed to go to the toilet and your brother flushed you in and you landed on a pillow!