Michigan, USA. I love that you wrote about what your ultimate adventure would be, rather than writing about an actual experience. Very creative! My students are very in to unicorns right now, too! I did notice that there are a few times where you could combine some of your short sentences to make one longer sentence. This would help the flow of your writing. Also, try not to repeat your subject (unicorn) so often! Thank you so much for participating in the 100 word challenge!
Michigan, USA. I love that you wrote about what your ultimate adventure would be, rather than writing about an actual experience. Very creative! My students are very in to unicorns right now, too! I did notice that there are a few times where you could combine some of your short sentences to make one longer sentence. This would help the flow of your writing. Also, try not to repeat your subject (unicorn) so often! Thank you so much for participating in the 100 word challenge!