Thank you for your entry this week in the 100WC. You have described a very detailed, beautiful picture of the Amazon rainforest. I could feel myself there, having an ultimate adventure myself! Just make sure you re-read your work to ensure you have used correct punctation and remember to include the prompt within your writing, this week it was …..’My Ultimate Adventure….’
Hi Rosie,
Thank you for your entry this week in the 100WC. You have described a very detailed, beautiful picture of the Amazon rainforest. I could feel myself there, having an ultimate adventure myself! Just make sure you re-read your work to ensure you have used correct punctation and remember to include the prompt within your writing, this week it was …..’My Ultimate Adventure….’
Otherwise a fantastic piece of writing!